Sunday, January 10, 2010

Response to #109


Drawing on Emotion


Sometimes I think I am a stone

A person too simple to like,

I thought emotions were like froth

Surging up, not buried alone

Beneath infertile gound, I strike

With a shovel, yet can't sunder,

I can't even shoulder my phone

So I don't question what my psych

Brunt as it is says about me,

I wish I could be Hercules

Strong enough to feel what is me


By Brandy Reeves


1 comment:

  1. Brandy,
    I see you were in the same wordie word bank as me and I must say touche'. Excellent job! I am in awe of your work and that you gave me such a great critique.

    Pamela

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